Persuasive Essay On Motor Vehicle Safety

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Each person on earth must come to care about everyone else's children. We must acknowledge that the well being of only our children does not lead to the success of our country. The welfare of all other people's children is what makes the success of a community, a region and a nation. After all, when one of my children needs assistance in the hospital in the future, that being a life-saving surgery, a regular health guide or so one, someone else's child will perform it; they will assist mine. So why not care about everybody if you may need me and I may need you. If one of my teenagers is injured by violence, someone else's child will be responsible for the violent act or mine. So why not teach them a way to prevent yours or mine from getting …show more content…

The leading cause of these deaths is lack of public health programs. Programs that would educate teens on the Do’s and Do not’s when it comes to driving a vehicle. Teens are able to acquire drivers license at age 16 in New York and man other states. Per mile driven, teen drivers ages 16 to 19 are three times more likely than drivers aged 20 and older to be in a fatal crash.2 Fortunately, youth motor vehicle crashes can be prevented. There are strategies that have been adapted but needs improvement programs that would enforce it on teens to limit these accidents. Also, the country or all states need to solidify a specific ago that they would allow teenagers to drive. As proven, teens between 16 and 19 die more than any other age group. My recommendation would be extending the age a teenager could drive from 16 to 20 or 21. In New Jersey, teen crashes are not as high as other states. A person cannot drive in New Jersey unsupervised unless they are 18years or older. They have a probationary diving system whereby probationary driver’s license is issued to young drivers and requires the supervision of a person 21 or older. These drivers are not allowed to drive between 11:01 p.m. and 5 a.m., unless you have a written statement for religious or work