Your article was tragic but very intriguing; I really enjoyed reading it. It is tragic that not only innocent children are suffering, police officers whose goals were to help not hurt also suffered at the expense of a speculation. The use of logos and pathos throughout this article was clearly prevalent. I agree that the author was very effective in presenting how dangerous simple charity work can be. I found it very interesting that your article even included information about why the Taliban now had suspicions of vaccination campaigns. You did a fantastic job with your analysis and personal response. You had a very small grammatical mistake at the end of the second paragraph by forgetting to fully type the word of out. You also could