The Montgomery Bus Boycott

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Emily,
Careful planning and organization was the most important in the success of the Montgomery Bus Boycott. We used one of the same evidence and two different ones. We both used Jo Ann Robinson’s leaflets. The difference is you used the letter to Mayor Gayle and the Highlander Folk School, while I used Ralph Abernathy and Martin Luther King presented Rosa Parks as a symbol and the 42,000 African Americans not riding the buses since December 5. To make your evidence more specific and more detailed, you should expand on your pieces of evidence and use quotes from the sources. For example, you could expand on the evidence from Jo Ann Robinson and could use the following quote, “distributing the thousands of leaflets”. Also, you could add another