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To Err Is Human Lewis Thomas

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In the Sample Essay A, the writer uses a numerous amount of in-text citations to back up the information which makes the claim stronger. Nevertheless, the student in Essay A used two sources, “To Err is Human” by Lewis Thomas’ and “The Difficulties Posed by Schools” by Howard Gardener, since the student used more than one source he/she has more evidence to enhance the essay. Although the essay was well written and organized, it had a few grammatical errors that were noticeable throughout the essay. In addition, the author of Essay A, changed perspectives to “I” instead of being in third person from the beginning to the end of the writing which causes confusion to the reader if not carefully read. After reading the essay multiple amounts of
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