A Paragraph About Women In The Military

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Women In The Military

Introduction
Imagine this; You have decided that you want to join the defence force as you want to serve your country.

You are determined. Determined to do something to help. Determined to do something that really matters.

You have worked so hard. You have put so much effort and dedicated all of your time into your training and now you are ready.

However, you are then told no. You are told that because you are a woman, you can't help on the front line.

Even though you passed all of the tests and you know that you are just as good as all of the men, you are still told no.

Why is this? Is it fair? No! It is not fair!

So why do some people think that women shouldn't fight on the front line?

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Governor General David Johnston said that her leadership in the front line was critical to her soldier's successes in the intense combat in Afghanistan.

Now does that sound like someone who isn't physically capable of handling the stress of war? Or someone who is unable to fight in close combat situations? Or someone that is weakening the military? Absolutely not!

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Here in New Zealand all women are equal so we are so lucky that we live in a country where we are all treated equally.

On September the 9th 1893, women in New Zealand were given the right to vote. New Zealand was the first country in the world to allow this.

Women were not allowed to serve onboard New Zealand navy ships up until 1986 and in 1995, the HMNZS Wellington was the first frigate to take women into a war zone.

These are just a few examples of steps New Zealand has taken to equality. However, in some overseas countries women do not have the same rights as men.

For example, 80% of women living in Afghanistan don't receive education and over 50% of girls are married before they are just 12 years

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