“Miss?” Mary came to help me.
“Who died?” I asked “Who died?”
Anne, steady as ever, pulled me upright and wiped the tears from under my eyes.
“No one has died,” she said, But her voice wasn’t comforting: it was commanding. “ Be grateful for that when this is all over. No one died today.”
I breathed out my fear. “Im scared.”
Anne put her hands on my shoulders and spoke. “You are a lady now miss. You must handle this like a lady.” (Page 87)
America was the happiest girl in life. America was marrying the Prince of Ilea for true love, not for convenience. She loved Maxon and Maxon loved her, how couldn’t she be happy. Still she felt a little guilty for her other elite companions, but for Marlee she knew Marlee did not feel affection towards the
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Having the beauty, intelligence, sweetness, posture, humor and being the favorite of the people, Marlee even knew she could become the Princess if she really wanted it, but Maxon was not attractive to her at all. That was an inquiry America had and a secret they did not share, why doesn’t Marlee want to leave the elite if she does not wish to be a Princess. America also had her secrets never wanting anyone to pressure her for those so she would not do it to Marlee. After the Halloween ball America went light-headed to sleep. Her parents were here, her little sister also, Maxon loved her she loved him, America had made peace with Maxon. America’s life was so perfect right at that moment what more could she ask for. A light trembling touch woke her up, a grim face of their made appeared in America’s vision, It could not be more late than five in the morning. America asked what was happening, the tense short assuring answer in their maids tone made America not to press for an Answer. When Lucy a maid, began to whimper in silent sobs America started to worry, but the other maids sent her away for a light breakfast. America got dressed in a black dense dress, heavy …show more content…
How scared give up clues for you to realize the plot will change drastically. Yo can sense the atmosphere just by reading the words that something is wrong. I believe this a very convenient way for a writer to develop their book. For example, giving clues that something wrong is going to happen to keep the reader on a hook. To practically make the book a page turner this way the reader is imagining and waiting for the event that will give meaning to the book. This technique also gives the reader time to understand the plot has just changed and does not let the reader confused as it follows more intrigued in to the book. The writer in my book “the Elite” Kieraa Cass does this a lot throughout the trilogy. Advancing you that problem in the story is approaching so the reader should have time to process the climax change that will happen. Other writers prefer to just change the direction of the book furiously this makes the reader to have to concentrate in a better way, re reading the passages to find the meaning and then being capable of understanding the event in the book. Kieraa Cass had an excellent idea for this book but her ideas are not fully developed. In the book there are many tragic parts for example the one that just happened and many other. This parts should make you terry eyed but it does not when it should. Her way of writing feelings is very vague it does not go