Chapter Summary: The Hunger Game And Gone Girl

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Mary, the paper is well organized and it does flow well from idea to idea. You did a wonderful job bringing in information from the texts to support your thoughts. I think a bit of work on that thesis is a key here. I love that you included physical and psychological deception as a significant idea, which makes the paper interesting and a joy to read since you have great sources and wonderful organization for them. Your sources seem well chosen and full of information related to The Hunger Game and Gone Girl. It is better to introduce the authors who wrote the piece quote so we know who they are, just a suggestion. I think you are italicizing several words for the purpose of emphasis in your rough draft, but remember that readers often annoyed