Compared To The First-Week

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Compared to the First-Week Essay, how have I changed as a writer? Writing has always been a struggle for me. I could not figure out what to write about, how to write it, or how to organize my thoughts. In the First-Week Essay, my thoughts are unorganized and, for lack of a better term, sloppy. I noticed these aspects while revising Essay One. In Essay One, my thoughts are more organized and less sloppy. My writing ability is nowhere near where I would like it to be, but it is a step closer.
In the First-Week Essay, I had incomplete thoughts and I did not know how to properly set up an essay. For example, I did not write a conclusion because I did not think of it as a necessary component. As my instructor mentioned, I tend to be more thorough