Hook/Attention Getter- Imagine, roughly 2,000 miles that divides our nation from Mexico. An uneasily managed border, that is far from secured… we are at a vulnerable stage. This has been an issue our nation has juggled for decades…millions of illegal immigrants that are flowing into our country… has President Trump come to a favorable solution?
Introducing/Thesis- Hello, my name is Lauren and i’ve done extensive research on the American debate on the building of a thick fence guarded in certain areas with drones and new gadgets hoping to create a more secure place for us to live.
Credibility-Through books, reviews, and reliable websites I have really been intrigued by the national security issue we have and what Mr.Trump’s answer to it!
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I thought so too, when I found out that that's the estimated number of illegal immigrants in the United States. Illegal is defined as contrary to or forbidden by law, especially criminal law.... Immigration is defined as the action of coming to live permanently in a foreign country.
MAIN POINT 1>The vast number of immigrants look for a better life in America, it is the incorrect way many choose to get here that I am against. Illegal immigrants or aliens, take away from our rights. Why should American citizens pick up the tab? I’ll tell you.. We shouldn’t!
MAIN POINT 2>There are so many hardships placed on America when we allow ourselves to be a victim of this.
MAIN POINT 3>The Washington Post says “More than ninety-two million Americans are unemployed.” Illegal immigrants account for over 5 million jobs. While that may not make a huge dent in the unemployment rate, many Americans are struggling to provide food for themselves and their families...those jobs can be going towards income in households of