The creation of a character is difficult, but when done right the character can be a vivid embodiment of actual life events of the reader; for example, in the passage the author uses many elements of figurative language, as well as diction, syntax, and imagery to generate a unique lasting impression of Quoyle. The author uses many of these terms literally but he goes more in depth with Quoyle’s actual emotions and feelings towards the world. The author uses word and phrases such as “survived childhood,” “camouflaged torment,” and “stumbled” to show Quoyle’s lack of confidence and self worth. The author from the beginning sets him up as a failure. Quoyle is loathed by his father and teased by his brother so he is always put down for his horrific appearance. He is always repressed so this causes the reader to identify with his struggle and want him him to succeed. Quoyle only wants to get away from this abuse and become his own man. The use of that underdog mentality gets more true when the author speaks of Quoyle’s lineage. …show more content…
His “earliest sense of self” is ironic because at the time he was fourteen so he had been emotionally caged for his whole life up until this point. The author’s imagery paints a horrific picture of Quoyle. His appearance is shown as something that can not be look past. On the other hand, the authors syntax is used to make Quoyle seem harmless and in need of help. The more you see Quoyle’s struggle you notice the change that has occurred in his family and community. The vivid detail that describes his loneliness also leaves the impression that people want to help