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Final Draft: Poem Analysis

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In my final draft I chose not to include the new line breaks partly because it changed the rhyme scheme that I had created. There was still some rhyming in the second revision, but it was inconsistent and seemed very random. I did not like how the new line breaks made it seem jumpy to read, it seemed to get rid of much of the smoothness that I had created in the first draft. I had been very conscious of line breaks while writing this poem, and although experimenting with the line breaks was a good exercise, I chose not to include it in my final draft. I included some of the changes in stanzas I had made in my third revision in the final draft. I chose to separate “She took her last breathe on her favorite bed” from the rest of the third stanza
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