After the editing process I have made two more drafts of this poem. I was not satisfied with the poetic word choice I had used and felt like I could have made my poem better. My partner had suggested to take out rhymes where necessary. I found this as a good suggestion. This poem is about giving hope to victims who suffer bullying, but it also has to do with teaching the people who bully a lesson, which is why I had taken out the formal rhyme scheme. The next two drafts I had worked on changing the starting of the poem and the ending of the poem. I had changed many stanzas, lines, and phrases and had given my poem more length because I was able to come up with more ideas and make the poem sound better. The stanzas/lines at the start of the