Since this was a timed essay I made a lot of mistakes, and it was also very difficult to revise
With this essay I did try new strategies for writing. I came up with a small outline of what I was going to speak about in each paragraph. Previously, I would write the paper from start to finish. I did not think about how I was going to arrange the paper before going into my writing.
This semester was filled with many bumpy roads. I struggled in the beginning of the semester with my writings , as I didn 't feel confident enough to write a well developed writing. I seemed to find myself struggling whereas writing was not my favorable subject. The major errors I had in my writings this semester would be , grammatical errors,work citations, transition words, formatting ,paragraph development, sentence structure , and sentence level issue. Therefore I have set goals to improve my writing in the future.
Your paper was very well written, I found no errors with formatting. As for grammar, I did find a few errors, but nothing major. I recommend that you use Grammarly.com or Paperrater.com. if you don’t already use them. Paperrater.com goes more in-depth and even tells you if there’s any plagiarism, and the level of high vocabulary and sentence in your paper.
The past decade has not seen any notable family sitcoms that has surpassed such leaps of social justice as some had in the 1950’s or 1970’s. While that may be disappointing to some, this is also a great feat for all television audiences. So many issues that were once considered, “taboos,” now, can be the premise of the sitcom altogether. Even the little things like interracial couples, married partners in the same bed, and even mentioning a pregnant woman is considered normal. Yes, the family sitcom is still no direct comparison to the modern family arrangement, but it is as close as were going to get for
It was initially revealed by show runner Michael Jacobs that the Riley, Maya and Lucas love triangle in Girl Meets World season 3 would be coming to an end. Which is why fans are looking forward to Lucas making his final choice. It would become another round of questioning emotions again. Which is why Girl Meets World season 4 episode 5 pushes the Love Triangel bit further. But though it was serious, the show did place some funny moments.
In my argument essay, I tried to voice a strong opinion, but fell short. Although our process analysis essays and cover letters haven’t been graded yet, I believe that I portrayed a more confident tone and style in those than I did in my argument essay. While writing those particular essays, I focused more on meeting the requirements sufficiently and voicing my opinion effectively. I believe that gaining this kind of insight on essay-writing is a reflection of improvement in my writing skills and overall
Lejla Hodzic Mrs.Monroe English III(H): Period 3 Journal Reflection-MP1 When first writing in my journal I struggled with how deep to go with my discussion questions and what I should be asking my classmates. I feel that I have struggled with this because I lack confidence on what I am trying to prove or say in my writing. When reading in the past I have never pushed myself to question the author’s purpose or ask questions that invoke much thought. Up to this point in the year writing in my journal as well as annotating in the text, has helped my reading and writing immensely.
As a College freshman in his second semester, I have learned to deal with the challenges that I have to deal with peaceful, yet exhilarating moment when my mind engages with an author’s thoughts on a page. As John Dewey states “Education is not preparation for life; education is life itself.” What Dewey insists is from my early days in high school to my first year in college as a freshman, I wanted to know the full concept of English; however, I have now realized this subject would fill in my void of English with noteworthy complexities. This was not the case for most of my second semester in Montgomery College; I always had trouble in various parts of the subject, such as development in thesis statement, sentence writing and reflecting on previous essays. Writing a thesis statement had been one of my down falls in English.
As each writing assignments is graded, I realize how much I have improved as a writer by the grade and the fewer mistakes that I have made in them. As each time the grammatical and spelling mistakes are fewer on each paper. I want to share how I have grown as a writer on second semester by being in class and reflecting on my previous assignments. Even though there weren’t many writing assignments this semester. There were some assignments that I have done poorly on.
ENG-122 Reflective Essay My writing process has changed tremendously over the course of this class. I feel more accomplished, confident and I feel sometimes that my ideas and thoughts just come in to my mind out of nowhere and I start writing about anything now. I pay attention to my punctuation and grammar more as I have polished them more now, not only when I write but then others write as well. I am constantly looking for errors and I highly think this is helping me a lot in my career.
Data Gathering The researcher secured all episodes of the sitcom Friends from its pilot episode which aired on September 22, 1994 up to the final season finale broadcasted on May 6, 2004. The researcher viewed the entire ten seasons of the Friends series at least twice. The researcher first casually watched all 236 episodes of Friends without being informed much about dominant gender ideologies, feminist theory, and queer theory.
Hello Dr. Weathers, The clips from the great American television sitcom “Friends” was very interesting and highly relatable for me. I looked at the scenario being portrayed on in that episode and I wasn’t utterly surprised at how quickly Rachel developed an attraction to Joshua at first sight. I could relate more to Phoebe because I am very comfortable in initiating conversations and first dates with people I find attractive and pleasant. Phoebe did not have a problem with initiating first dates with a man because she didn’t subscribe to dated sociocultural stipulations that a man is supposed to be the one to ask a woman out. And she understood that while the man may not be shy to ask her out, he might be dealing with some emotional and psychological situations that are not giving him enough motivation to make the first move, like in Joshua’s case his recent divorce was holding him back.
My expectations coming into the course were high and remained high throughout the duration of the course. The essays I wrote in the class really challenged me to progress in my writing skills. The illustration essay really served as an example of what not to do when writing at a college level. My approach of the essay was really misunderstood and grammatically incorrect.
My journey in this English 3001 course during the past ten weeks, and over the course of taking is English class I have grown and learned more that I thought it is necessary for me to know as a student. I have improved in my overall writing skills because if you look at my second in-class essay and the rest of my essay you will see that I have made progress and improvement compare to my diagnostic essay and the first in-class essay. Moreover, now that I have completed the English course my skills are better that I am capable to meet the university standard writing requirements. This English course additionally taught me how powerful the composed word and language can be. This quarter my ability to compose essays and express my thoughts, ideas,
