Ms. Warren did a amazing job changing the mood of the creation story. I wish I could change moods as easily as Ms. Warren did.Ms. Warren changed the creation story from dry and boring to exciting and fun.
There are many examples of how Ms. Warren changed the mood. The first, change in mood was shown through details. In Ms. Warren's story the details were fun and made you laugh. “Above her rose Uranus,the sky, dark and blue, set all over with sparkling stars.” (Pg.1) This quote proves, that Ms. Warren was more fun because in this it was very detailed and boring when they were introducing how the world was made. In Ms. Warren's when she introduced how the world was made she said chaos got bored so he made planets which makes it more fun. Another example of how the change in mood was shown through characters is. “Sky smiled down at Earth twinkling with his countless stars, and they joined in love.” (Pg 1) This passage shows, that Ms. Warren's story was more fun than the other story because, when Earth and sky got married Ms. Warren said they looked at each other and said ohh! and
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Ms. Warren made her story have characters with a more fun or exciting personality. “Cronus, the youngest, but the strongest, dared to take the sickle.” (Pg.1) This quote shows that Ms. Warren's story had a more fun personality because, in the story the wording was very boring and in Ms. Warren’s she said Kronos was like umm what are you doing here to his mom, and he was very anxious to stop his father making Ms. Warren’s story have a better and more fun personality. Another change in the character's mood was. “ They were the first gods, taller than the mountains…..” (pg.1) This quote proves that Ms. Warren’s story was more fun because, when she described the gods she said they were HUGE like GIANTS!!! In the other story they didn't sound very big with their words when describing big characters, their words were just dry and