In " The 3 Effects of the Five Paragraph Theme" by Kimberly Wesley, she discusses the problems with using five paragraph theme (FPT). In this article, the writer argues that by using FPT will limit the students idea that can be represented in the paper. Students are trying fit the specific FPT requirements, and they cannot write any deeper or include new ideas. Student's tend to think not following the FPT will lead to bad grade. Therefore, students would not including more information, because it can be risk taking.
The book 102 Minutes is a story of the fight to survive. Set inside the twin towers, authors Jim Dwyer and Kevin Flynn tell the haunting stories of both victims and survivors of the terrorist attack known as 9/11. Describing the morning before the attack, along with the lives of the people in the twin towers, creates an emotion connection between audiences and the text. This emotional connection evokes emotions of pity for the people impacted by this tragic event. By the biographers using the rhetorical device of pathos, an empathetic relationship is formed between audiences and the individuals in the passage, which sparks feelings of anxiety to see if certain people survived the attack, which opens the minds of the audience to other information and opinions that the composers of the text may present throughout the text.
I referred to unit 7’s discussion post where you outlined your essay. So far your research has proven to make for an interesting essay. I’m sorry I did not find a persuasive thesis statement in Unit 8 though, meaning I’m not convinced that there should be a policy change. I know you stated this is a working thesis statement which was not included in unit 8’s post. If you don’t mind, I would like to give some guidance.
II The book describes African Americans in the time period of slavery through civil war and civil rights revolution, to 1980s, after the segregation of the black race. The book mainly focus on the speech done by social activists of different time period. In addition of the reasons and different beliefs of those social activist had. Such as Frederick Douglass, who believe we can’t wait for somebody else to fight freedom for us.
Argument Essay Outline Thesis Statement: Owen J Roberts middle school should increase the time spent in F.C.S because it teaches student parenting skills, it teaches student how to handle money, and it teaches students to be independent. T.S.--Owen J. Roberts should increase the amount of time in F.C.S because it teaches parenting skills. Evidence 1- Knowing F.C.S a student would know what to do if giving the burden of babysitting or accidental pregnancy. For example a teen mom might not know to burp a baby because it's less obvious of a thing that a baby needs to do.
ESSAY OUTLINE The topic 1 chose: 6 1. Introductory Paragraph Introductory Sentence: A Complicated Kindness is one of Myriam Toews’ humoristic creation yet, it depicts the harsh reality of 17 years old Nomi Nickels, struggling to find her identity in the Canadian Mennonite community she lives in.
In the book,”The Program.” by Suzanne Young, Young begins with the protagonist,a seventeen year old named Sloane Barstow, who witnesses her classmate, Kendra Phillips, being taken away by a handler during school. Kendra Phillips is terrified and barely hanging on to reality. Two years ago, Sloane's brother, named Brady, committed suicide and six weeks earlier, her friend Lacey was taken by “The Program” as well as her father because she was “sick” In an attempt to manage with the constant monitoring of their reactions to all of this, Sloane, James Murphy, and their friend Miller try to cover their emotions and act normal.
In Recitatif by Toni Morrison, two girls, Roberta and Twyla, grow a bond with each other while in an orphanage called St. Bonny’s. They did not really fit in with the other girls, which gave them a reason to stick together. The other girls were orphans, but Roberta had a mom that was very sick and unable to take care of her and Twyla’s mother “danced” all the time and could not provide for Twyla. The two of them got bullied by the bigger girls, aka the “gar girls.” They would push them around and laugh at them, which did not seem to be a big deal at the time.
The struggles found in Southern Africa and other ravaged areas throughout the world needs bright innovative people to develop new plans in order to stimulate change. The world needs people like Gretchen Steidle Wallace. She founded an organization known as Global Grassroots that provides training, funding, and advisory needs to small, community based grassroots projects. One of the main change agents that Wallace lauded heavily was Zolecka Ntuli. Zolecka realized that her town’s women needed an advocacy group to help them gain more rights.
Mender DiMartino Ms. Staples English 9, Block D 26 January 2023 Power of The Voice People may all see the same image, but we all have different perspectives on how we feel on the same topic. No matter the case, we must address how we feel, not by violence, but through our words. In Thomas’s novel “The Hate You Give” by Angie Thomas, Starr experiences and witnesses many discriminatory acts, ultimately learning that racism in society will not change unless people speak up and challenge oppressive actions and beliefs on personal and societal levels. (Added Thesis)
This shows that both authors have extensive experience in human health and the aspects that affect it. The article was also peer-reviewed by Mauzerall of Princeton University, giving it further
The model encompasses five stages as discussed below. Pre-contemplation (Not Ready); in this stage, the patient is not always ready to take any action about any foreseeable future health risk. For instance, in the situation of Jane, she could have taken action if she knew that the diabetic condition was hereditary in her family (Prochaska, 2013).
Introduction -Background: Briefly describe the text and the problem. - Thesis: For the purpose of this prompt, the thesis must contain how you plan to approach the analyzes of the text. In other words, in the thesis I will introduce the methods that I used to analyze the text, the weaknesses of the text and the consequences of such weaknesses. I am talking about the drug advertisement, so a possible thesis will probably have the following structure: considering the information gathered through the surveys and interviews, and after analyzing the text using the activity theory, were found problems in the way that the text is designed.
The data for this thesis paper will be obtained from research online, from
2.0 Procedure A few secondary resources were used in the research process. These sources range from newspapers articles, news website (BBC) and online databases which were accessed via the Internet. These sources were chosen based on direct relation to the topic and its scope. Moreover, these sources were referred to gain better understanding about the topic and explore expert opinions and research done in order to fulfil the criteria of each objective
