Argumentative Essay
The Mongolian Empire has many positive and negative effects on Mongolia and the world. The Mongolian Empire was an Empire that was created by Ghengis Khan in 1206, and he had made many excellent and bad decisions for the Empire. In addition the Mongolian Empire was made in Mongolia which is a country in Asia. Even though there were so many positive and negative effects there were more positives than negatives. Which had outweighed the negatives. All of the positives outweigh the negatives because more of the effects had improved everything.
To begin with, there are multiple positive effects that the Empire has created. With all of these positive effects so many people have been helped. During this time they had been focusing
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It is my belief that the negative effects long-term effects on the lives of citizens inside the Empire. First, I would like to point out that even though the population during the reign of Ghengis Khan, might have grown. Many lost their lives. In two cities alone, there were roughly 2.9 million people killed while the Empire took control of them. Now that was just a small part of the history. It’s time to look at the bigger picture of total deaths. In East Asia over the course of 126 years, an additional 15.5 million died. That doesn’t include the number of people who died in the other regions that they conquered (5 Most Lethal Wars in History). Though this might be true, it doesn’t take into account the lives that continued on because of the merging of countries into the Empire. The Mongol Empire had made it possible so religious leaders didn't have to pay taxes. This allowed the people to practice any religion they wanted. In addition to this the leaders got to practice their religions freely. This Empire’s wealth had also largely increased to all the agriculture. With wealth increasing they were able to get the supplies that they needed in order to help their country and Empire keep thriving. This proves that the benefits of the Mongol Empire were very beneficial. Therefore, the Mongolian Empire didn’t affect them