Mr. Jacks: A Narrative Fiction

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I woke up, seeing all black. I felt the rocky, texture of the ground. Next to me, was Mr. Jacks. “How did you get out?” I said dazed with confusion. “Um,” he stuttered, “I found a uh, soft spot in the forcefield, and um, slipped out!” he said, sounding impressed with himself and the lies i knew, and was suspicious of. However, I just ignored it. “Where are we, this is like nothing i've never seen before.” I said. “I don't know Kate.” Mr. Jacks said. I could tell he had been lying by the way he was talking. I kind of just pushed it to the side with all my other mixed emotions. We had escaped the force fields we have been stuck in for what seemed like forever, but was only a couple of days. I was determined to get home, but I saw something in the distance approaching. Scared, I turned to find Mr.Jack's, only to notice he was gone. …show more content…

The creature approached. “Get away! I’m armed!” I cried. “Can I help you?” said a nearby voice coming from all directions. I looked around in confusion. “Mr.Jacks? Is that… is that you?”. “Are you lost? Do you know where you are. I won’t hurt you.” Said the voice. Maybe he was telling the truth. “Where am I? Wheres Mr.Jacks.” I said. “My apologies--” The creature stepped out into the light “--My name is Zack, can I assist you?” He looked like any other human, but just to be sure. I approached slowly. There was something off about him, he was faded, with lines running horizontally through his body. I went to touch his arm to see if it was real, and he sort of disappeared for a moment. It was almost as if he glitched. “Were a computer programmed based species. We think digitally, you think chemically.” We? What could he mean by we? I looked around, and others stepped out into the light. One women approached seeming very interested. My hairs stood up, my jaw dropped when she said “You know a Mr.Jacks?” “Um how...how do you know him” I said creeped