Ender’s Game Outline Thesis Statement: Ender Wiggins is a bad person because he destroys and entire race, cares more about winning than his soldiers’ well-being, and hurts and even kills people. I. Topic sentence: Ender Wiggins is a bad person because he intentionally destroys a whole race. a. Evidence #1: He blows up and entire planet b. Evidence #2: He frequently fantasizes about killing buggers and agrees to go to a school specifically intended to train him to destroy them. c. Analysis: The fact that Ender is able to destroy a whole race without even thinking about it twice shows that he is cold-hearted. He is able to commit mass murder which is one of the many traits of being a bad person. II. Topic sentence: In addition, ender is …show more content…
Evidence #1: While in Battle School, ender pushes the soldiers of his toon to their breaking limit, just so that they would win the next battle. b. Evidence #2: When ender blows up the buggers’ planet he kills many of his soldiers’ ships in the process. c. Analysis: By putting winning above his soldiers’ well-being he is putting his need to win above his soldiers’ health. This demonstrates that Ender is selfish. In addition consequently he kills many of his soldiers in the final battle, proving that not only does he put his needs above his soldiers’ well-being he also puts his needs above the soldiers’ lives. III. Topic sentence: Ender is a bad person because he hurts and even kills people, a. Evidence #1: At the beginning of the book Ender gets into a fight with Stilson, he knocks him down and then continues to kick him eventually killing him. b. Evidence #2: While in battle school Ender gets into a fight with Bonzo, Ender ends up killing him with a blow to the head. c. Analysis: The fact that Ender was able to commit murder proves that he is a bad person. During both fights he knocks down his enemy but instead of stopping there he continues to beat them to the point that they die. In addition not only does this happen once but