Alternative Ending: 500-650 words There I saw him. On the floor, lying down peacefully next to the human treachery that was the root of all the things that went wrong. My heart felt as if it had been punctured, the last piece of memory of my brother is gone. I didn’t expect that Max and I would ever bond, especially not in this way; What we have is an unbreakable friendship. A brotherhood. But now that he gone, it feels as if the brotherhood disintegrated into the atmosphere all around us. I watch him from the hole that was caused in the train tracks, just leaning over slightly to adjust my point of view. I couldn’t think, I couldn’t move, I couldn’t handle the pain, it was a bolt electricity that was running down my veins. Next thing I know, my feet were running as fast as wind behind me. Dodging through the maze of forest trees, as the light peaking through the leaves from above were hitting me, the sound of the maple leaves crunch within the steps taken. A cold substance starts soak my denim jeans, each step I take I could feel the rocks pounding on the sole of my shoes. There I see Max. Lying down on a big flat stone surface; Next to Kyle, the person who betrayed my entire family. …show more content…
Trailing down my face, dripping from my chin onto Max’s body. I knelt down, my hands search for his face, caressing him for the last time. Everything blacks out as my focus was towards him, and only him; the police sirens create a background noise, men in blue uniform stepping out of the car on the search for the victims. I didn’t care, I wanted to stay with Max. There was no other dog that could replace