ipl-logo

Quotes From The Scorpion Research Paper

242 Words1 Pages
What We Did...
On October 22, Christine and I reviewed her two-part homework assignment. First, she was asked to write her own sentence for five terms from the Scorpion book (chapter 21). Second, Christine wrote a response to the following prompt: Which character do you dislike the most and why?

Christine's sentences were good. However, two of them were not clear. By adding more details and using synonyms, Christine created sentences stronger.

Christine's Sentence: Taints about El Patron made Esperanza leave.

Modified Sentence: Tainted memories of El Patron made Esperanza leave the Farm.

Christine's Sentence: President Park decreed to make government made history textbook.

Modified Sentence: President Park decreed that the Korean government
Open Document