Parker J. Ocampo Ms. T. Costa ENG4UO - 01 5 July 2024 Effective Writing traits in “The Long History of ‘Go back where you came from’ in Canada” Canada is always known for seeming to be a peaceful safe haven for immigrants, or in comparison to our neighbors the little guy”, or “the nice guy”, however from reading Micheal Fraiman’s article “The Long History of ‘Go back where you came from’ in Canada”, Fraiman provides a compelling and insightful examination of xenophobia in Canada. Fraiman, through demonstrating a highly effective use of the three writing traits: Idea, organization and voice, allows the readers to be reminded of the imperfect history of Canada as well as a wake up call for the ongoing xenophobia that is present in our current …show more content…
Fraiman provides specific and historical examples, such as the influx of Irish immigrants during the Great Famine, 1845, to in detail illustrate the deep-rooted history of Xenophobia in Canada. He exemplifies the systemic nature of xenophobia; "The typhus fever and dysentery have reached even this remote place,"(Fraiman 2) which puts strong emphasis on the widespread fear and resentment toward Irish immigrants amidst the Great Famine. By grounding each of his arguments in detail, through historical Canadian events and relations, Fraiman effectively demonstrates the long-standing nature of xenophobia and its impact on Canadian society. This clear demonstration of ideas brings depth to Fraiman’s text, allowing the reader to understand the persistence and relevance of xenophobic behaviors and attitudes in Canada. Another successful trait is Organization. Both the logical and chronological organization utilized by Fraiman boasts the clarity and emotional impact of the …show more content…
Fraiman’s critical tone towards xenophobic attitudes heavily engages readers and suggests that they reflect on the sensitive issues presented. Fraiman’s tone is evident when he states, "His words can only be described as bluntly, historically and categorically racist,"(Fraiman 3) in reference to the blatantly xenophobic rhetoric, aforementioned in Canadian politics. This impassioned tone makes the article more relatable and impactful, as it combines emotional appeal with blunt factual accuracy. While Fraiman's voice is filled with passion and a strong sense of emotion, he also has a voice of reason which grounds each of his points, effectively drawing readers in but also reinforcing the article's message. This engaging tone ensures that the article resonates with readers, encouraging them to reflect on the ongoing issues of discrimination in society. In conclusion, Michael Fraiman’s article effectively uses the writing traits of ideas, organization, and voice to provide a compelling examination of xenophobia in