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The Lighted Window: Figurative Language

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I like how I put together my essay, but there certainly are things I don't really like. For organization and purpose, I believe I set it up neatly and echoed out the purpose. I made four paragraphs: An introduction, one paragraph for "I had been hungry all these years", one paragraph for "The Lighted Window", and finally a conclusion paragraph. When writing the essay, I tried to be on topic and get the point across. For evidence and elaboration, I definitely could have done better. I should have written more about and paid more attention to the figurative language. There was clearly an abundance of figurative language present throughout both poems, including metaphors and symbolism, which is part of what I could've written more about. Last
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