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The Moment My Life Changed Forever

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When taking this class as a college undergrad you have an option to go to conferences. This class also allows you at least one week of revision for your final version. I recommend signing up for conferences for suggestion on how your paper can be improved. Revisions can be used to give you an idea of how you can improve your essay. I have always liked the idea of someone telling me what my essay needs to push it towards greatness. When revising the narrative for “The Moment My Life Changed Forever” I tried to look back and remember more of the conversations I had with to better explain every moment in the story. This made me fade away from my main point. When reading over my first draft I noticed that the main focus of the essay was only
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