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In analyzing the sample essay, some of the strengths are the explanations and descriptions that are given throughout the essay. In the first paragraph of the essay, it covers the necessary background information into understanding the photograph. Providing background information about the art and artist was a great way to start of the first paragraph. The information that was given will help readers to have a better understanding about the essay. The thesis statement is well written; it exemplifies what the readers are going to be reading throughout the essay. In addition, the essay contextual analysis was very detail and organized throughout the essay. However, some of the citations that are quoted are long and wordy, and some are not needed
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