Thesis Statement For Camp Half-Blood

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I am MrKotter630, and I can run faster than XLR8. I arrived at Camp Half-Blood covered in sweat from running really fast, not knowing of who I am.Chiron greeted me and tells me I’m a Demi-god, but which one? I am the son of Apollo, Delphi, because I can run super fast and my only weakness is love. THESIS STATEMENT: I am the son of APollo because I can create plagues, I can run super fast, and my ONLY weakness is love. PARAGRAPH #2: Transition: THE PLAGUE! Idea #1: The only power that I only have that Apollo has is the plague. This power can make the enemy team VERY VERY sick. THE QUOTE I FOUNDED ON A WEBSITE: www.Reference.com My first piece of evident that I am Apollo is that I have the power to bring plagues like my father. On www.Reference.com, it states, “Apollo’s powers are listed as bringer of plagues and illnesses, medicine, and religious healing.” This passage shows that one of Apollo’s powers is to bring plague and illnesses. During the war games at Camp Half-Blood against Ares, somehow I manage to get the Ares team with a plague, and I don’t know how I did it. …show more content…

Idea #1: “Not only Apollo makes people sick with the plague, he and I have Unicorn's blood, Dark Energon. Dark Energon is a deadly and when it touches something, it DESTROYS IT!!” WEBSITE OF FOUNDED QUOTE #2: https://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Transformers:_Prime THE QUOTE(SAYS): “Rise my army! Behold! The Power of DARK