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Virgil's Argument Analysis

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I started revising this essay by rephrasing my thesis statement. I changed my ideas about Virgil’s opinion of the Underworld, and incorporated the justice he sees in the afterlife. I then went through the paper and fixed the minor grammar and spelling errors. After those revisions I went through and I looked at the specific comments made throughout the essay. I changed some of the wording and added in extra details. I also focused on ways to make my argument less wordy and concentrated on getting to the point quickly. In order to add to the effectiveness of my argument, I revised my paragraphs to include a straight-forward topic sentence. I feel that this revision really strengthened my argument and now allows for the reader to follow what
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