Appeal Letter For College Admissions Essay

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Yes, I write this letter as an appeal for my admissions decision for the Fall of 2016, but more so than that, I feel the need to give a dream school of mine at least one more shot. Regardless of the consequent decision, which I fully realize is statistically to be against my desired response, I must write this letter.

Personally, I hold Berkeley in the highest regards as far as colleges go; having been an Oakland resident, I have come to cherish the diverse atmosphere and thirst for knowledge in Berkeley and the surrounding area entropy.

I realize that, like thousands of the other students who may be bewildered at an admission decision, I am simply used to trying my best and yielding the fruits of my labor. Life is full of ups and downs, successes and failures, I have had my fair share of failures in life, but I would always get up and try again, and again until I succeed, I never give up. U.C Berkeley has been my dream since my freshman year of high school, this would be my third time applying to Berkeley, although I have been accepted to a hand full of other great universities, I still prefer Berkeley as my first and only choice. …show more content…

I assure you that if I’m admitted I will be a significant active member of the Haas community. Last semester I was a full-time student at BCC and was working two-part time jobs averaging 30 hrs. per week, I’m the sole provider for a family of seven back home in the Gaza Strip, despite all the hardships and the unprecedented disadvantage I faced, I was able to get a 4.0 GPA. This semester I’m 100% confident I will earn a 4.0 GPA, which will be a huge boost for my overall