Body Paragraph #1 Point (topic sentence): Success is not what it is all it is about; ,first, there are accomplishments that need to be made. Plus, working hard at what one does is something to be proud of. Claim #1 (first point related to your topic sentence): f First of all, Chris McCandless in Into the Wild had a great opportunity to go to a great college, because he was a great student in High School. Evidence #1 (what the text says; quote): This text says that “As the school year goes on, Chris seems thrilled to go to Emory, returning to his clean cut look, taking pride in his grades and even talking excitedly about plans to go to law school...” (Krakauer 84 ). This text says that Analysis #1A (what the quote means/shows about your …show more content…
Evidence #1 (what the text says; quote): “Chris McCandless went to high school and finished higher than everyone else.” (Krakauer,4). Analysis #1A (what the quote means/shows about your essential question): This quote shows that Chris worked really hard to finish higher than everyone else. Analysis #1B (what the quote means/shows about your essential question): When someone puts their mind to it then they can be the best that they can be. Claim #2 (second point related to your topic sentence): When someone has a great success and when someone does not do very well then that person can get irritated and that drives that person to work harder. Evidence #2 (what the text says; quote): “...One of the successful survivors, those who practice and concentrate will do great in life” (Gonzales,20). Analysis #2A (what the quote means/shows about your essential question): It means that the ones who study and will do great things in life. Analysis #2B (what the quote means/shows about your essential question): It also means that the ones who concentrate in things that needs to be concentrated on will work out for them in many different