The three essays that I read range widely in the amount of effort put into them. I read Lorenny Infante’s, Joana Benitez’s, and Matthew Busarello’s essays. To start, both Lorenny and Joana put a lot more effort into their essays than Matthew. Matthew wrote very little and what he wrote doesn’t have great grammar. In the last sentence alone there is multiple mistakes. “Than it will bring up my lexus and i 'll be able to read more.” He uses the wrong “than”, it should say “then” instead. Matthew should work on capitalizing his “ I’s ” Joana’s was pretty good. She had slight grammar issues and her sentences started off not telling you what it was talking about. You can tell that she put more effort into this than Busarello. Last, there’s Lorenny’s.