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Essay 2 Cover Letter

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Essay #2 Cover Letter On essay #2 “Does education empower us? Or does education restrain our personal growth?”, my thesis statement is “both motivated attitude and the strongly liberal curriculum that reconstruct education systems to raise the intelligence and inspirations make education empower ourselves”. So I agree that education does empower us. While writing this essay, concerns and questions I had were about my thesis statement, evidence and counterargument.
At first, does my evidence confuse readers? Is it strong enough? Because two cited quotations is required in this essay, so while I was writing information, the important issue is that both quotations should support my topic sentence. It’s not easy for me to hold them together to
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