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To this day people do not allow gay marriage, and many people harass them for being attracted to the same-sex, and wanting to marry them just because it’s “wrong” and god didn’t make the man or women to be attracted to the same gender.
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Gay marriage should be allowed because many foster children would be adopted and have a happy, stable home, their marriage would not impact any other marriages, and suicide rates would decrease because most suicide provocations are due to bullying and harassment in school or any other place else and more gay marriages would normalize being gay.
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Many foster
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Suicide rates would go down if gay marriage or acceptance was allowed because most kids who commit suicide are due to bullying at school or other places. Coming out is already difficult as is it and being harassed and bullied is twice as more difficult. By allowing Gay marriage it will let anyone know that your sexual-orientation is not a social disability, that it is accepted and respected, and you do not need to take your own life for being gay.
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