How Does Sharon Olds Create Tension In On The Subway

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“On The Subway” Sharon Olds
The conflict between different races has always been a struggle of humanity. The clash between black people and white people from different backgrounds and lifestyles has always been a part of American history. More recently, it has decreased to racial stereotypes and uneven wealth distribution, but the problem is still present in modern society. Sharon Olds explores this racial conflict in her poem “On The Subway” written in 1987. In this poem, Olds uses symbolism, contrast, and imagery to convey the speaker’s feelings of frustration and nervousness about an encounter on the subway. Sharon Olds uses symbolism to show the speaker's frustration towards racial division. The speaker explains that the man's “black …show more content…

Olds starts the poem off by writing “The boy and I face each other.” This use of imagery by the author creates a sense of suspense and tension for what might happen next. Also, the suspense created by the face-off is used by the author to show that the speaker might be fearful of what might happen to her. Furthermore, the speaker reflects that the man “is wearing red, like the inside of the body exposed while I am wearing dark fur, the whole skin of an animal taken and used.” This reflective imagery can be interpreted in many ways to show the speaker's feelings of frustration with the relationship between black and white people. For example, the description of the man “wearing red” and the speaker wearing “dark fur” illustrates the economic division between the races and how the black community is poorer than the white community. The author uses the words “inside of the body exposed” to describe the man to reflect how he and the black community might be vulnerable to others who might persecute them. Additionally, the author adds to the description by stating “the whole skin of an animal taken and used.” This additional interpretation could be used to show that white people might be using and profiting off black people that are vulnerable and exposed. Overall, Olds uses the deeper message behind this imagery to illustrate the speaker's feelings of discontent about how black people are treated by the white