The Mongols Impact
The Mongolian empire was one of the most powerful empires in the world and their influence has changed the world. The Mongol empire’s impact, whether it was for the better or worse, was very large and affected Europe's status as a country. They had to do what was necessary to make them stronger and the world better. The empire, even though it wasn’t seen as at first, had a positive impact on the world in the long run. This would be done for its spread of trading, their reining being very reasonable, and its impact in the modern world.
Topic Sentence/Subclaim The positive things that the Mongols have done are far more lengthy and good than the bad. (Claim connected to reason in Thesis Statement)Context/Reason The thing the mongols wanted was to conquer and control which is (remember that reasoning can also go throughout the paragraph)The Mongols allowed the freedom of religion meaning that if you got conquered by them and lived, you could be any religion and you could travel along any trade route (ThoughtCo.). They weren't
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Context/Reason The reason that some people would believe that the mongol empire was bad might be because they killed an estimated 30 million people. (remember that reasoning can also go throughout the paragraph)Evidence The Mongol Empire has conquered a lot of central Asia and has ruled over a century which would be bad if they had been under cruel rule(World History). Another reason why people might believe the Mongol Empire was bad was because they have spread through Central Asia to Europe (ThoughtCo.). Evidence Explain/Connect Evidence. Explanation(remember that explanations connecting to the claim/subclaim can also go throughout the paragraph) Connection/Inference (Explain connection to claim/subclaim and/or how it proves your point) Concluding Sentence (Wrap up