As the bus pulled into the campground for the first time, I was worrisome about what was ahead for the next five days. But when I left, my mind was filled with endless knowledge and my heart was completed. Those five days, although very short, allowed me to grow beautifully into the person that I am now. The experience that was gained gave me the idea of the open-minded person that I intend to be.
My teacher explained how to complete a narrative, and procedural essay clearly. I would love to use some of her teaching methods someday. It 's an amazing feeling to be able to write about an experience that altered your life. If I teach English someday, I want my students to learn how to express themselves when they write. It would be exciting to be able to sit down and read my students papers.
I really enjoyed being able to present information in my own way. I think my personal remarks really made the information seem interesting and relevant. I think this writing was my model for my personal narrative which was very
Out of all the major papers we wrote, the major narrative was my favorite. It was very personal to me and I was able to portray words on paper that I had thought about for years. I feel that I accurately described how I felt about my family situation and was able to make my reader feel the same way that I do. This was also the essay that I received my highest grade on.
-Audience was my class. I think that with my story they would be in able to learn more about under developing countries. They would have the possibility to learn more about difficulties that families on those countries go through during bad times. 2-I think I was successful because I was in able to inform my audience about many problems that families in my country had to go through. 3-My family journeys during very dangerous periods of time.
How has reflecting on and/or researching your topic and creating the story impacted you? As I have said before, my story is based on a personal narrative and I has left everlasting
When I shared my personal testimony, I learned it could encourage others to pursue a relationship with Jesus. During my senior year of high school, I took Algebra II and it was probably one of the hardest years, academically, but also the most encouraging, spiritually. At the beginning of every school year, the teacher makes a chart of assigned seating for the students. Fortunately, I was seated next to a girl named Beatriz. I had known Beatriz since middle school, but I never really built a personal friendship with her until Algebra II.
In my perspective of songwriting, I love to write about relatable personal life
With that in mind, it is now time to explore the various other factors to which connect my personal experience with the police and Freire’s ideas on the banking and problem-solving methods. And to do that, one must be able to understand my past life before the incident, more specifically, during my time in Eliot Middle School. During my time in middle school, I was part of the Sheriff’s Youth Foundation, where I would constantly interact with different sheriff officers within Altadena. Of course, I now know that there is a difference between a sheriff and a police officer, but at the time, I simply thought they were one in the same. Not only that, but I would constantly watch and consume all sorts of media including the police.
That I and I alone controlled my own destiny. All life is, is a report card, and I showed that I could change what that report card read. In realizing this I believed that I could actually achieve my dream of becoming a doctor. That I was fit to join the competitive world of medicine. I showed I controlled who I was and who I would become.
I have a shelf in the corner of my room that houses more memorabilia. There is six trophies for piano concerts that I performed at in high school. Piano was a huge part of my childhood. I started playing when I was six years old, mainly because my sister took lessons and I was jealous and wanted to be just like my big sister, until I was 17 years old.
Though it was foreign to me at that time, poetry became my favorite hobby. I have always loved the free form style of writing because it lets you express anything you wish to convey. There is no topic that you have to filter. Stories helped me to grow as a writer, but it feels like now poetry helped push me into adulthood, so-to-speak. With poetry, I was always writing dark or sad lines, because that really is all I had really known how to write at the time; that was the way I was feeling as well.
Taking the time to write out people, places, things, and memories I couldn’t live without along with goals I have for my life, showed me what is truly important. I think it is common for people to never take the time to write down what is actually driving them to accomplish things in life. By writing these things down I was shown what I really value and what is not as
Many of them I thought were good, yet there was not much to write about. Honestly, recalling and writing about an event that changed my life is not an easy task. There had been so much that have happened, and in a way or another, my life was changed for either the best or the worst. Desperate as I could ever be, I started looking into my drawers to find anything that might spark a memory. Then there was this blue round neck shirt that I found.
Experiences and challenges allow myself to feel more determined in achieving the same level of success in writing as in other subjects. I have had many writing experiences in the past years, especially at this school alone. The best writing that I remember producing was last semester in my Humanities class. We were supposed to write a compare and contrast essay on the movie The Shawshank Redemption and the book Just Mercy. Because the topic was