Suzie Alternate Ending

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she's seventeen and getting married she still doesn't seem to notice the weirdness of it all. From the inside of their apartment complex, Suzie noticed her best friend Athena sitting outside on the bench, with the biggest smile it almost looked like she was smiling to herself. Suzie walks outside and approaches her best friend Athena. “Athena spit it out! Why are you so damn happy?” said Suzie. You can see the confusion on Suzie’s face, looking at her best friend with concern. Athena looks at Suzie then jumps up from the bench she was sitting on and gives her a big hug, whispering in Suzie’s ear, “I’m Pregnant,’’ said Athena. Suzie still with a confused face began to drift off into her own thoughts. The wind begins to blow and for a moment Suzie’s little body began to feel cold. ‘’Let’s go inside and drink some hot chocolate,” says Athena. As they walked inside, the weather once warm became bitterly cold. The instant change in the weather felt like a warning to Suzie, but she didn’t know why? …show more content…

Bruce began to yell and says ""Explain something to me, why do you have doctors calling me for stupid ultrasounds.” Rosey rushes into the living room filled with tears, she looked as if she had been eating ice cream for hours with all the ice cream in her hair. Rosey sees Bruce and felt a sharp pain in her stomach, Rosey knew it was the guilt she carried for sleeping with Athena’s boyfriend Bruce. Bruce was in the room and, she knew that he didn’t want to see all of them in the same room. “What the hell happened to you,’’ said Bruce. In a matter of seconds Rosey drops to the floor and crawls to the corner and screams “Two wrongs don’t make a right. "Suzie and Bruce look at Rosey with a shocked