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Synthesis Essay On Social Media

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When considering the entire essay, the paper was easy to understand and read. However, in some areas, the grammar used in certain sentences made the essay hard to read due to run-ons and minor mistakes on grammar. For example, the sentence saying, "or that social media isn't only about body, but about; trends, news, jokes, etc" should be revised. I suggest revising it to say that teens often describe social media as not only pertaining to body image but trends, news, jokes, etc. The reason for this change is mainly due to the semi-colon and the first word of the sentence: or. Another minor change I propose is in the fifth paragraph starting with "Teen do it to their selves" and ending with "their physical state." In addition, you could revise
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