I often meet people who tell me things like: "I have no passion in life," "I would not know what to do with my life," “I do not know what I like," or they simply start crying from the stress that causes them to even consider it. Well, the first thing I want to tell you is that we all have things that we are passionate about, not only professionally, but also in other areas. This was my case, but after asking myself so many questions, I discovered that I had several passions in my life. (So the thesis statement is supposed to be the last sentence of the first paragraph but you have it in the second paragraph, also you spaced your paragraphs too much I’m not sure if we can do that.
One of them, I have had since I was a child, a dream, which is to become a surgeon. All the time, since I have memory, I
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I could not believe it! Even after the surgery, I still did not believe that I had just seen “a real life heart” (maybe?) the heart of a person. It was an unforgettable experience and I mentioned it to thousands of people. Never getting tired of telling this story; Every time I told it I felt the same emotion, it made my hair stand on end. But not everything is fun and entertainment, being in a surgery is an immense responsibility. The life of a person is in the hands of the surgeon and any mistake he makes can cause tremendous problems. Neil Kokemuller, the author of “The Hazards of Being a Doctor” states, “A major financial hazard for doctors is increased risks of malpractice lawsuits. Doctors in many specialty areas face the unfortunate prospect of getting sued by a patient or family if they make a mistake, or even if they don't, but the results can be bad.” (Add citation after quote) You might even lose your career, which costs a lot of time and dedication to obtain, just by making the slightest