Note: (----) means parts I stutter and reworded my words again Note: blank spots are when I pause ( ) Transcribe : The word I have heard from the speech is that the story of Byan Stevenson was that he was a special kid who was addressing the racial injustice system in the American legal system. ( )How he was setting the stage for something significat in the speech. I remember he is a lawyer and he’s in a courtroom and a janitor comes to encourage him to keep his eyes on the prize. “ He ends his speech with himself being in a courtroom and a janitor ---- janitor entering the room and immediately encouraging him to “ keep his eyes on the prize ''( ) Keep in mind Stevenson is a black lawyer so people tend to discriminate against …show more content…
The second part of the speech contained about 25% logos.( ) Because his logic has proved evidence to pursue ----- support his argument that made his speech more credible as he speaked and developed his speech to his audience and the way he addresses the public. “how trustworthy and credible he was throughout his speech”. Filler word umm “Because he is a lawyer and has that title it makes his argument more credible than any other persons given the same speech” ( ) 10% ethos “I have acknowledged Stevenson’s vocal delivery and how it resonated with the audience while listening to his “Ted talk speech”. ( ) He would modify the loudness of his voice as the story’s tone shifted or when he wanted the audience to engage and interest the public. He addressed the audience by using his pitch and, when appropriate, an expressive tone of voice as part of his vocal delivery.” Stevenson’s vocal delivery and how it resonated. While listening to the ted talk speech ---- while listening to the ted talk speech