Argumentative Essay: The Murder Of Hae

There were other possible alibis and witnesses that could have proved Adnan did not kill Hae, but detectives did not look into them well or not at all. Jay was the State’s main witness. He provided a motive to the police, lead the detectives to Hae’s car, saw Hae’s body, and was Adnan during the majority of the day. (Episode 1, 2, and 4). Jay was there with Adnan when he was talking about killing Hae and why he wanted to. Once Adnan had killed Hae and called Jay, he would go pick up Adnan and then seen Hae’s body. After a couple of hours, the two bury her body and ditch her car. Jay led detectives to where they ditched her car. Jay’s whereabouts, when he was not with Adnan, were very clear. Hae’s car could not explain what had happen to her

And they was not a lot of evidence to prove that Jay was telling the truth. Inez Butler Hendrix ran a concession stand right at the gym entrance; Hae would go there every day and get the same thing: a very fine apple juice and Hot Fries. That day, she drove up in front of the gym where the concession stand was and left her car running. ‘So she came around the circle, parked her car right there, jumped out and ran in to get something to drink and to tell me to tell the bus not to leave her.’ Hae was the manager of the boys’ wrestling team and they had a match later that afternoon; she was supposed to go to. Inez Butler Hendrix, did not see Adnan near Hae’s car. (Episode 2). Inez Butler Hendrix, had a concession stand right by the gym entrance; Hae would go there every day. The day she disappeared, Hae parked her car in front of the gym, where Hendrix’s concession was, and left her car

Hendrix did not see Adnan anywhere near Hae’s car; not inside the car either. Jay was the only person who says he saw Adnan in Hae’s car that day. I think, when the police Hendrix, the detectives already decided that Adnan was killer and and they did not ask Hendrix any deeper questions. Jay told the cops that he picked Adnan up from Woodlawn at six p.m. and he was talking to a friend from track. It was noted on March 18, saying, ‘said goodbye to track buddy, Will.’ Will said that no cops nor no attorneys had every called him asking, “was Adnan at track that day?” Will confirmed that track started at four and there was no excuse to be late. (Episode 5). Jay told the cops that he went and picked up Adnan up from Woodlawn high at 6 p.m. He said he saw Adnan talking with a friend from track. It was noted, on March 18, saying, “said goodbye to track buddy, Will.”Will did say that track started at four and you cannot miss track practice; no excuse.Will does remember Jay picking Adnan up track all the time; it was a normal thing. Jay did pick Adnan up from track practice, but I have a sneaking suspicion that he did not pick him up at 6, but earlier than