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Ash Falls: A Narrative Fiction

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“I had an awesome time tonight,” I said as the house came into view. Ash Falls was a grand white and blue house that made your mind race to lazy summer days and apple pies before you stepped over its threshold. Complete with a wraparound porch and dormer windows, it was the perfect backdrop for daydreaming. Derek smiled, “I’m glad, I did too. I like you a lot Piper.” We walked around to the back and went to stand near the cherry blossom tree. As the date got closer and closer to the end, I felt increasingly more nervous. Nervous that he would kiss me, nervous that he wouldn’t. “I haven’t been on many dates, but this was definitely a good one,” I told him. He smiled and reached for my hand, somehow managing to capture both. I tried not to let it show that my breath had been …show more content…

“Damn it,” he cursed, startling me. “I’m too late.” I looked at him curiously. “What are you talking about, it was a great kiss.” The smallest lies tasted the worst. He laughed, “Don’t take pity on me Piper, it wasn’t a great kiss, it wasn’t even a good one. You are already caught by him, he’s got you wrapped up around his finger.” A strange thrill ran through me. Other people had noticed which meant I wasn't imagining it. “Who?” I asked, playing along. “You know who, Piper,” Derek said. He took a step back and placed his hands on his hips before looking down. “Damn it. I actually like you, that's what sucks. I hope you don’t get hurt.” I looked up at him apologetically, feeling a stab of pain in my chest. I hadn't meant to hurt Derek. I just wished I had realised we weren't right before we had our date. “I’m sorry Derek, you’re great, but all I can see is him.” “It’s so stupid how the bad guy always gets the girl,” Derek said. It was the worst thing I ever heard Derek say about his cousin. I laughed, “The bad guy only gets the girl when he loses his bad boy attitude. But hey, he hasn’t caught me yet, I’m not even sure if he wants to

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