Brief Summary Of The Story 'Eleven'

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In the story “Eleven” Rachel the narrator “acts” more like a child. The story states that “Rachel was crying in front of everybody”. Her face was all hot with spit coming out of her mouth. Plus she was making little animal noises. This means that Rachel acts like a child when she is really a tween, since the text shows it. “That’s not, I don’t, you’re not…not mine” I finally say in a little voice that was maybe me when I was four. This is saying that Rachel was talking very low like when she was four probably because she was about to cry. And all because something was not hers. “Until there aren’t anymore tears left in my eyes and it’s just my body shaking like when you have the hiccups and my whole head hurts like when you drink milk too