College Admissions Essay: The Influence Of Dance

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I never imagined my first ballet class to be such a defining day for me. And the thousandth time I walked into the studio, I still didn’t completely comprehend that ballet was responsible for an unalterable part of me. Ballet has brought a fair amount of tears and stress, but dance is a beautiful art form with so much to offer and I am thankful for everything it has given me. I am confident that ballet has shaped me into the person I am today and i wouldn’t be complete without it. For years I walked into the large, mirrored studio nearly everyday, surrounded by my closest friends and inspiring teachers. The majority of my identity is defined by dance. Even though I recently quit ballet, it will forever influence my life greatly. In the beginning of every school year, we usually introduce ourselves with your name and one fact about you. My response has become automatic, "I'm Caroline and I’m a dancer.” …show more content…

I quickly figured out that I was naturally talented, which allowed me to excel and eventually be accepted into prestigious dance programs. During my first two summers in high school, I trained at the Boston Ballet and San Jose Ballet School. During my second year, I realized how odd the world I had whole-heartedly thrown myself into truly was. I finally understood why my school friends were so amazed by the fact that I was going across the country, for weeks at a time, to live with other ballerinas and spend every day in the studio. Seeing the other dancers sharing the same dream as me was comforting, until the first placement classes began. I suddenly became absorbed by the seemingly perfect dancers, flawless lines, and mesmerizing feet. My self confidence was shaken and I felt completely defeated. I was thankful for this opportunity, but completely overwhelmed and frustrated at the same