Makayla: Having Sequence is great Use First Pattern. But it can also be bad as well. Makayla only seem to just keep using that pattern instead of going and trying other pattern that may work a little better. I know this all to well. I am the same way when it comes to taking test. The advice I would give to her would be try different learning patterns, what works for one assignment might not work for another. Try making them work together so some things aren’t that challenging to accomplish.

John:

He seemed like he had just gave to much information. Sometimes when it comes to writing we tend to go into much more detail than what’s needed. My Advice to John would be, sometimes when writing to family being short, sweet, and to the point can