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What I intended for the essay to have on the reader is to inform and entertain the what is stated on the essay. I like to give the two sides of coin when I talk about a certain subject. I want the reader not just only see the one side that I might agree on but also another take on it to see if the reader might differ from from opinion. The purpose for that is to make the audience think a little for themselves on their own and make them wonder about the topic and what it really is. My decisions into making a draft for this essay wasn’t all the great. It is a draft so my decisions into it was just as to put all my ideas out there and when I write my final copy, all I have to do was just revise it and elaborate on certain subtopics in the essay. It didn’t take much to make my decisions because I just wanted to see and read all my objectives points in my essay before …show more content…

My approach into resolving the challenge is write down all my point and see what point have a similarity with each other or use some help online to help me better my transitions. Most parts challenge me a lot because Im not one yo write ab out certain topic and when I write I like to get what I have to say in one paragraph than say it in four pages. There are some parts that bring me the least challenge when writing. When I essay and lets say in that I essay I had to summarize an article, the summary of the article I would have to say would be the least challenging in my part because information is already given to you and all you have to do is just focus on main parts and shorten

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