As an eighth grader, I have learn that writing is an another way of speaking expect it’s written in paper with multiple color of ink. I realized that writing lets me express myself, made me think about myself and others, and most of all writing answer many question that I would never think about. In this year of school, I have grow great deal of improvement in my writing and find weaknesses. As a writer, I found some of my greatest growth is specific areas is writing a lead for my introduction. Writing a lead for introduction has alway been one of my favorite part. I believe that lead must be something the reader can relate to or something would make them think. If the lead doesn't grab reader's attention then the reader would not read the piece. As an eighth …show more content…
I learn that pretty good at writing description but, I use too many adjective in my description which makes my sentences really confusing. My description is pretty good but still working on not using too much adjective in sentences. Another thing I need to improve in writing mature sentences with higher level of vocabulary because sometime the sentences doesn’t make sense and I get lower grades for that so I believe that I should try to work on writing mature sentences with higher level and mature vocabulary. I choose this as my final copy because it proves that because in this writing my description has too many adjective. My choice of reflection in my strengths is writing a lead, my writing proves that leads are better than before. My weaknesses as writer is grammar issues because I have move to this country in fifth grade, I had grammar difficulties and I try my best to fix the problems with my writing. Another weaknesses is writing mature sentences but, I will try my best to fix this problem. I believe if I can improve on those topics then my writing style will be much better than