Dear Classmates,
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Like most people, many are captivated by the mystery of outer space. Space's alluring qualities and ability to spark many's imaginations are a few reasons it heavily influences pop culture and government funding. Did you know there is an entity we are all familiar with that is captivating and more of an enigma than space that deserves as much attention and funding as space? Despite covering over 71 percent of Earth, just as mysterious as space, considering that man has yet to explore, over 90 percent of the ocean is yet to be studied concerning its depth. Ocean exploration has more benefits to Earth and humanity than space exploration. As a result, government funding and
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This spill, like almost all oil spills, resulted from oil transportation, not oil extraction."
The lack of knowledge about offshore drilling creates unnecessary barriers aiding the prevention of further developing and exploring these oceans. It confuses and makes people reluctant to the idea of ocean exploration. Scared, they will get heavily criticized for it, this is why these accusations need to be dispelled, and the truth is shown.
Classmates, we need to participate in the push of ocean exploration. Could you imagine all the lives we could save if we get a bigger ocean exploration budget? With the essential pharmaceuticals and other resources, we still have yet to discover the deep depths of the ocean. Imagine how we could revert massive pollution in the sea with the discovery of crucial ingredients if marine biotech makes groundbreaking technology and societies we could get back on their feet with highly likely rare earth metals buried below in the sea. After all, ocean exploration may be our only chance to undo much of the damage humanity has caused to our