How can I make my thesis clearer?How can i make my argument more persuasive? Am i going in the right direction? What can i include in my research?
When buying food from the supermarket down the street, we tend to ask ourselves as we buy the product, “Is this food really healthy?” As you stroll down the aisle and you go into the vegetable and fruits section or even the meat section, many of us see that everyone is buying certain items. We never stop to think about where the products really come from and what the product contains, but we end up buying it just like everyone else. Nowadays, conventional foods have been a risk factor for our health. That is why organic foods have been re-introduced (people back before the industrial period had nothing but organic food because they didn't have chemicals, growth hormones, etc to make the food inorganic) into the media and our society. It (what does "it" specifically refer to? Identify) has now grown worldwide and continuing to grow. Organic foods are healthier because it contains less toxic chemicals causing better health benefits for everyone. --this should be your thesis, but it needs strength in assertion and the counter argument. Suggestion: Organic foods are healthier than inorganic foods because organic foods contain less toxic chemicals allowing for better health of consumers. This is just a guideline; however, you need more than one sole reason why organic
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What else makes a food inorganic? What are the results of pumping chickens full of growth hormones, for example? This is where your research comes in and your give 3 points that