Personal Narrative: My Trip To The Lake-Home

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JUMP! “Girls! we are going to the lake-house! get going!” I flung out my door with my tie-dye bathing suit on. My sister, Mallory,walked out of the room behind me with a cheetah bathing suit on. I sprinted down the hall to the cream colored door. I slipped on my sandals as my sister did too. I turned the gold door knob and walked along the sidewalk. I opened my moms car door and flopped in next to Mallory. CLICK! CLICK! went our seat belts.My mom walked to the drivers door.She sat down and started the car, VRRRRRRRROMM! 10 minutes later… We pulled in the driveway and I hopped out. “Hi Kiera!” I said as I went towards her.Kiera is my cousin and she has a brother Aidin,and a sister Alaynah. “Hi Autumn, want to play waterpark?” Water …show more content…

Ice cold water shot up my legs.”COLD!” I shouted. ‘’Do you want me to go first?” Kiera asked. “yes, it's freezing.” I got up the ladder as kiera got down.She almost got right in! I thought, ok, if kiera can do this so can I. I walked right down the ladder. “COLD! COLD COLD COLD!” That was a mistake. I got right back up. “Autumn come on, you can do it, It's not THAT cold. Kiera said hopefully. I pulled the rope connected to the raft and pulled it my way, and jumped. I landed on the raft! Just then my mom came and got to the ladder with my Aunt Krissy, Aunt Tisha,and Aunt Kimmy. Aunt Kimmy jumped on first, then Aunt Tisha.”AAAAAAAAA! “ they yelled. Aunt Krissy pulled the rafts rope and went down the ladder so the raft will come closer. She carefully walked on. “Autumn should I jump?” Asked my mom. My face turned cold. What if I say yes and it fails? I thought. Oh well it should be ok. “ Yes! jump!” I was excited now. I scooched over so she wouldn't jump on me. “Ok…..” Fling! she jumped.Her green diamond cup flew in the air with wine. Oh no! “AUTUMN!” I want everyone to know how I felt and to probably never give advice to your mom to see what happens. I felt scared of what my mom would do to me. My mom wanted to keep her cup but it flew in the air. Also if you give your mom advice and it turns out bad,