Run-On Sentences: Jack And Jack The Beanstalk

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For the following story, improve the sentences so that they are not repetitive, but be careful to avoid run-on sentences. Don’t forget to improve the quality of writing by adding ADJECTIVES, strong VERBS and ACTION PARTS. Jack and the Beanstalk Jack and his mother were very poor they had to sell their cow at the market. Jack trusted a stranger in town. Jack traded the cow. Jack traded for some beans. Jack’s mom was upset she threw the beans out the window. Jack woke up. He saw the beanstalk outside the house. Jack climbed the beanstalk. Jack arrived at a giant’s house he was scared the giant’s wife tried to help Jack the giant could smell Jack. Jack waited for the giant to sleep. He escaped with the giant’s golden hen.