Throughout my speech, I looked at my notecards quite a lot and didn’t really look at the camera. The first speech I did, I looked at my notecards many times and people critiqued that. The beginning of my speech was great but my conclusion was really short and didn’t wrap up the whole essay. My speech was a little short from five minutes and I think it’s because I didn’t’ expand my conclusion more. I thought I had a good attention getter for my introduction and made my thesis statement really clear. Throughout the speech, I said some “um’s” and was choppy. I noticed I didn’t use my hands that much during the speech and I think that’s a great way to interact with the audience. The critique cards from my first speech, people put down I used too